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How to Craft a Value Proposition That Actually Converts

  • Writer: Jonathan Eyres
    Jonathan Eyres
  • 43 minutes ago
  • 3 min read
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If brand positioning is where you stand in the market, your value proposition is what you say when someone asks:

“Why you?”

And here’s the uncomfortable truth…

Most businesses don’t have a value proposition problem. They have a clarity problem wrapped in buzzwords.

You’ve seen them:

  • “We deliver innovative solutions…”

  • “Customer focused excellence…”

  • “High quality service at competitive prices…”

These don’t convert because they don’t mean anything to a busy buyer. A strong value proposition makes your business immediately understandable and worth a second look. Let’s break down how to build one that actually works.

What a Value Proposition Really Does

Your value proposition answers three questions in seconds:

  • What do you do

  • Who is it for

  • Why it matters

That’s it.

If a visitor lands on your site and can’t explain those three things quickly, you’re leaking conversions before the conversation even starts.

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The Simple Formula That Works

A clear starting framework:

We help [specific audience] achieve [specific outcome] through [unique approach or differentiator].

Example:

Weak:

We provide high quality digital marketing solutions.

Stronger:

We help multi-location service businesses generate qualified leads through data-driven paid media and conversion-focused landing pages.

Notice the difference:

  • Specific audience

  • Clear outcome

  • Defined method

  • Implied expertise

Clarity beats clever every time.

Step 1: Get Specific About Who You Serve

“Businesses” is not an audience. The more specific you are, the faster the right buyers lean in.

Better examples:

  • Local home service companies

  • Multi-location healthcare groups

  • E-commerce brands doing $1M to $10M

  • B2B firms with long sales cycles

Specificity creates relevance.

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Step 2: Lead With the Outcome, Not the Activity

Customers don’t buy what you do. They buy what happens because of what you do.

Compare:

Activity focused:

We build websites.

Outcome focused:

We build conversion-focused websites that turn more visitors into qualified leads.

One describes the work. The other describes the value.

Step 3: Highlight Your Real Differentiator

This is where most businesses get fuzzy.

Your differentiator should answer:

Why not the competitor down the street?

Strong differentiators often include:

  • Speed

  • Specialization

  • Process

  • Technology

  • Experience

  • Risk reduction

  • Support model

Weak differentiators:

  • Quality

  • Service

  • Integrity

  • Passion

Those are expected, not differentiating.

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Step 4: Make It Instantly Scannable

Your value proposition lives in high-speed environments:

  • Website hero sections

  • Ad headlines

  • Email previews

  • Social profiles

Best practices:

  • One clear headline

  • One supporting line

  • Plain language

  • No jargon

  • No internal buzzwords

If someone has to reread it, it’s too complicated.

Step 5: Pressure Test It in the Real World

Before locking it in, ask:

  • Can a stranger understand this in five seconds?

  • Does it clearly state who it’s for?

  • Does it highlight a meaningful outcome?

  • Would a good prospect say “that sounds like us”?

If not, keep refining.

Common Value Proposition Mistakes

Watch for these:

  • Trying to sound impressive instead of clear

  • Being too broad to offend anyone

  • Leading with features instead of outcomes

  • Copying competitor language

  • Burying the message below the fold

Most conversion problems start here.

Final Thoughts

Your value proposition is not just website copy. It is the front door to your entire marketing engine.

When it is clear:

  • Ads perform better

  • SEO traffic converts higher

  • Sales calls start warmer

  • Pricing conversations get easier

When it is vague, everything upstream works harder than it should. Clarity compounds.

Coming Next in the Series

👉 Visual Branding vs Verbal Branding: What Actually Drives Trust

We’ll break down how design and messaging work together, where most businesses over invest, and how to balance both for maximum impact. You can find all these helpful articles at The Ultimate Guide to Digital Marketing: Strategies, Trends, and Best Practices.

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